This is a place of ME. This is a place where I will let the walls down and be honest. Joys and stories or tears and heartbreaks, they will all be here. Devotionals to poems, my heart is open to you. I will love well. I will love you and honer you by allowing you into my brokenness and the truth that God has reviled to me. This is a place of Me. Continue if you dare ;)

Thursday, October 11, 2007

Breath

When I was writing this it was for my poetry class but every time I read it it reminds me of my friend Jennie! It's just sooo her! So ya I think I might start posting my poems that I write for home work if ya'll don't mind :)
love ya!

*Breath*

The grass tickles my feet.

The mud squishes between my toes.

A branch brushes my cheek.

The water rushes at my ankles.

The sun shining hot through the trees, hot on my head.

Cool, fresh spring breeze waves my hair.

The sweet smell of the flowers in my hair catch on the air.

A bird sings, A woodpecker pecks, A bug buzzes.

Just standing there.

Soaking it all in.

It’s barely different now,

Than when I was three.

The only thing changed in this forest is me.

9 comments:

Josh said...

Yes! That is totally Jennie! :D She's always able to see the beauty in simple things like that. :)

♥Sarah♥ said...

I know!!! It was just so her!

Chiarra said...

i love the little things they are so much more beatiful than the obvious because no one ever stops to look at them. you are beautiful no matter what anyone tells you!!!!!!!!!! did you know that i love you?

♥Sarah♥ said...

gosh your soo sweet!!!! I think I'm starting to get that you love me maybe just a little..... lol

Kiki said...
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Kiki said...

JUST A LITTLE???????????????
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
????????????????? are you nuts or just out of your mind!!!!!! i love you more than i could ever say and i think that some lucky guy is going to come along and sweep you of your feet. i doubt though that he will be good enough though. for someone as special as you. but hey you should love him anyway!!!!!! maybe we can help him be worthy!!!!!! just kidding. for a guy to sweep YOU off your feet he will have to be worth it. do not get discouraged guys. sarah is a very nice gal and i am sure that most of you are worth her time. just love God and she might love you!!!!!!!!!!!


*sniff* i am so sad that i am not a guy. i could try to win your heart!!!!!
so guys be happy that you are guys and can win her heart!!!!!!!!!!!!! and i mean it too. )

LOL!!!!! can you tell that i am having fun?

i truly do think you are pretty and are more beautiful even the guys know. keep it up now. don't stop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! when you think that you are not pretty or not skinny enough or not good enough, just remember what your friend chiarra said:

I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!



i thin that this is the longest and most meaningful comment that i have evr left on someones blog. you should feel special!!! bc you are!!!!!!!!!!!

Kiki said...

oh by the way, i love you to bits!!!

♥Sarah♥ said...

lol got it ;)

Kiki said...

good!!!!